Mountain Empire Community College
MECC Explorations Arts Publication 2003
Photography Drawing Short Story Personal Essay Poetry Judges


Second Place Short Story


Florence Dreams

by
Joan Boyd Short

Florence Dupree hit the mute button on the remote control, took one more sip of her watered down iced tea, leaned her head against the sofa back, and allowed her heavy eyelids to close completely. She simply had to talk to the doctor about this constant drowsiness. She thought anti-depressants were supposed to perk you up, but that certainly had not been the case with her. The sun poured through the window and created a puddle of warmth in the folds of her favorite rose-colored housecoat. The gaudy white and gold Home Interiors clock in the foyer chimed the half-hour. Three-thirty. Mercy! She should have dressed hours ago, she knew that, but she just hadn't been able to convince herself to expend that much energy when she had awakened in her daughter's tiny guest bedroom well after sun-up that morning. Besides, her daughter's plane wasn't due until at least four-thirty, so it would be six-fifteen at the earliest by the time she collected her luggage, got the car out of long-term parking, and made the forty mile drive from the airport.  That would give Florence an hour or so for a little nap and still leave her plenty of time to feed and brush Elwood before his "mommy" got home. The homemade chicken curry soup was already in the crock pot. She'd seen to that the night before. The only thing she'd have to do before Scarlotte got there was put cornbread in the oven, and that she could practically do with her eyes closed anyway.

The sudden bounce and subsequent flurry of energy on the cushion next to her barely jarred her reverie. She must be getting used to that silly little dog. She wasn't mean to him. Sometimes she even found herself feeling sorry for him when Scarlotte insisted on dressing him for the weather in those ridiculous little rainboots or making him wear a plaid bow clipped to the topknot of fluff between his ears.  Occasionally she found herself relenting to his yippy pleas for her to throw his stuffed giraffe so he could run get it and lay it down again next to her leg. Elwood, God forbid the thought, actually seemed to like her more than he liked Scarlotte. She was sure Scarlotte had noticed, and Florence knew it irked her. "Just one more thing to hold against me, I guess."  The thought held her, saddened her, and she balanced in it for a half-conscious moment on her journey into dreamland. Scarlotte loved that little terrier more than life itself. That's why Florence was there, after all. . No vets or kennels for Elwood. No indeed. Nothing short of a live-in babysitter would do. Scarlotte had been a dog lover from the day she turned six years old. Her best friend Adelaide had gotten a baby beagle for Christmas, and nothing would do, once Scarlotte saw that puppy, but that she should have a doggie of her own-for her sixth birthday that following February.  Florence had told Earl not to be dragging a dog into that house, but Earl adored his baby girl, and there were few wishes in the Dupree household that did not come true for her if he had anything to do with it. Hence, that first little wire haired terrier named Jake. Florence didn't think Scarlotte had let him out of her arms for more than five minutes at a time during the first few months after her birthday, until.

Oh no, please, she didn't want to deal with "until." Not today. Not on this warm, peaceful afternoon. It was thirty two years ago. How many more times would she have to relive it? But it was too late to stop the quick chill that made the hair on her forearms stand up. The memory idled loudly at the crossbars of her consciousness. There was nothing she could do but let it ride on through. 

She and Scarlotte and Jake had been waiting for Earl near the Ford Glass Plant door when the night shift walked out into the muggy early morning air.  It was their first real vacation-a week in St. Pete in her aunt's spare bedroom on Pasa Grille Beach-and Earl had insisted on driving. He said he was "wide awake and wired".  Scarlotte snored softly from the back seat of the dark blue l952 Buick, her hair spread around her like a halo on that worn out little pillow with the pink ruffled case her great-grandma had made for her. She couldn't sleep without that pillow. Jake snuggled happily in the crook of her small, sweaty arm, matching her snore for snore.  Florence had been up half the night trying to finish the packing, so it didn't take long for the cool air rushing in though the open windows to make her sleepy as well.

"You sure you don't want me to drive?" she remembered asking.

"I'm sure. 'Couldn't go to sleep right now if my life depended on it. You rest up for a little while and you can spell me later when I get tired. I'll get us as far as Montgomery."  She hadn't needed much convincing.

She'd never known for sure if it had been the impact with the bridge railing or the sudden rush of the ice cold, murky water that had awakened her. The images careened through her memory like a magic lantern show.  Panic. More panic. Overwhelming panic. Flailing. Struggling. Fighting the iron grip that pulled, dragged, and shoved her toward the surface. Soft clay between her toes. Spasms of wracking coughs.  Scarlotte's limp form across Earl's arm. Pounding, desperate pounding. Then, crying. Thank God, crying. Retching. More retching. Coughing. Sobbing. The three of them, grasping for every breath-clinging, clinging to each other on that Alabama river bank  And then Scarlotte's piercing scream.

"JAAAKE!! Where's Jake?" Florence knew what Earl would do before he moved. She grabbed for his leg and barely missed his soaked work boot as he rolled just out of her reach and started for the water's edge.

"NOOOOO! Earl! Please, no. It's too late. There's nothing you can do."  The water closed over him.

She had never known how long she and Scarlotte had sat there, clinging to each other and staring at the smooth, silent surface of the water. She had been only vaguely aware of the approaching steps, the gentle voices, the blankets, the rescue raft, the whirling lights.  All she remembered was the silence, the hollow silence.

Even though she had never understood why, Scarlotte had always blamed her. Perhaps it was because the possibility of her own childish selfishness that had sent her father back to the water had been more than she could bear. Florence didn't know-never would-and she was weary from the thirty-years weight.  It didn't matter anymore. There was nothing she could do.  The sullenness of Scarlotte's late childhood had turned into open teenage rebellion and settled, finally, into an adulthood of barely civil tolerance. Nothing Florence did or said seemed to please her daughter or make a difference. She didn't even have the energy to be sad about it anymore. Elwood stretched, sighed, and curled himself contentedly against her left thigh. This time she closed her eyes completely and drifted away into the beckoning dream.

----------------------------

The house was almost dark. A beam of light flashed through the living room window. Headlights!  Turning into the drive.  Scarlotte was home. Elwood hit the floor with a yelp and raced for the kitchen door. Florence followed as quickly as her aching legs would carry her, dreading her daughter's disdainful expression when she found her mother standing in the doorway in that worn out, rose-colored housecoat. Dazed and confused, she reached without thinking for the handle on the storm door and pushed it open a few inches. That was all it took. Elwood was out and gone in a flash. Before she could find a voice to call him back, she heard the squeal of the tires and the unmistakable yelp. Then, silence. Hollow silence. She couldn't bear it. Her heart stopped.

------------------

Scarlotte pulled her Sebring convertible into the carport next to her mother's old dark blue Toyota, got out, stretched her back, and popped the trunk lid with her remote control on her key chain. Something felt wrong.  It was not until she reached for the overnight bag that it struck her. Elwood wasn't barking. That was impossible. What had her crazy mother done now? Wasn't there one simple thing she could get right? Elwood! The spontaneous hard rock of panic turned to soup in the pit of her stomach.  She dropped her purse and ran for the backdoor.  The keys fell from her trembling hand as she fumbled at the lock, and she almost dropped them a second time before she finally opened the door and stepped into the dusky kitchen. The unmistakable fragrance of chicken curry soup-her favorite-emanated from the crockpot on the counter next to the stove. Okay, maybe there was one thing her mother could do well. The thought interrupted the panic for one split second. 

"Elwood. Here, baby. Mommy's home. Elwood! Where are you?" She heard the pitch of her voice rising to a shriek of hysteria. The ghostly blue glow from the television spilled across the hallway from the living room door. She stopped in her tracks and braced herself, her hand on the door frame. Taking a deep breath, she willed herself into the room. On the sofa, Elwood lay in her mother's lap, curled in the soft folds of the rose-colored housedress. He whimpered and blinked, but did not move. The gaze from her mother's lifeless eyes met her own. She met the gaze for a brief moment only, sighed deeply, then looked again at her baby.

"Oh, Elwood. You scared Mommy, precious.  I thought I had lost you. Mommy couldn't live without her Elwood. It's okay.  Mommy's here. Come on, baby. Come to Mommy."  She reached for the trembling dog, but stopped-frozen-when she heard the low, unfamiliar growl.

Home

 
Updated May 10, 2004